Fsdigitaldiary’s Reviews > Half His Age > Status Update

why would she frame it that way???

“Waldo, please get off me—”
“No,” I say, rocking on him.”

Like he said no.. and that should be respected 😬😬

okay this is getting uncomfy. the dynamic is so weird and fucked . the fmc is literally doing anything to get him to f her and he’s saying no repeatedly.. i don’t like how this is framed at all.

“Waldo, you’re seventeen and I’m married and I’m your teacher,” he says sternly.
“I know. I know that. But the way you look at me. The way you look at me is— you look at me like you see me. All of me. I just felt like there was something between us.”

ahhh the second hand embarrassment:////

“ I needed this reminder of one of the benefits of working at Victoria’s Secret: helping women feel better about themselves.”

two sentences later :

“The question takes me off guard, especially coming from a woman who’s standing in front of me topless with fried ends and poor boundaries. ”

The writing is really bad honestly…. did not expect that.

“When I get home, I kick my shoes off, take a leak, and throw the toilet paper away since we’ve never not had clogging issues”

“Scarface, Goodfellas, Pulp Fiction . The Holy Trinity. What is it about boys and these three movies? Always with these three movies.”

I hate how this is written as if it’s quirky “omg ur so right “moment but it’s so millennial and old. Like the discourse is so old , we know they are filmbro’s faves.

the way young kid’s bodies is talked about here is so awkward and weird tbh…. both for men and girls. i don’t want to hear specific detail about a tween’s body😬😬😬