Leanne Tollefson’s Reviews > Down & Dirty: Zak > Status Update
Leanne Tollefson
is finished
Loved it . Didn't like the poor grammar. Made the guy seem stupid . Otherwise good. Left on a cliff hanger of course to buy the rest which I want to
— Jan 16, 2026 01:19PM
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Leanne Tollefson
is finished
Some of it was super cringe. Made the main character seem uneducated in terms of they way language was presented. Having said that couldn't out the darn thing down. Tons of spice. I would read the series. I feel cheated that it's such a short story that left on a cliff hanger. I'm sure that's the goal lol
— Jan 14, 2026 06:44AM
