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Yakult Boy is 99% done
Sending the ashes away and wondering if Nainai and Ellery reunited in the after life would've been elegant. But noooo you had to give a cheesy dream vision of their heaven meet up. A smudge on an otherwise sentimental ending.
10 hours, 10 min ago
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Yakult Boy
Yakult Boy is 99% done
Weird to have the fight for lgbtq rights only mentioned in the end. Again feels weak when it didn't inform the meat of the story
10 hours, 8 min ago
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Yakult Boy
Yakult Boy is 98% done
Use it to buy your freedom is a dystopian thing to say haha
10 hours, 22 min ago
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Yakult Boy
Yakult Boy is 97% done
Saying you earned a spot on Forbes as if people on Forbes didn't just either buy their way in or know someone to get in. That ain't a flex.
10 hours, 32 min ago
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Yakult Boy
Yakult Boy is 95% done
Unlike her mom, Magnolia gets a lot of patients for her counseling clinic. Can we get a mention of a generational difference or something because I thought women in this country don't support other women
10 hours, 39 min ago
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Yakult Boy
Yakult Boy is 94% done
The only response to Ellery proposing a lavender marriage situation is Parker's too traditional. Not the massive wall that is Indo homophobia. This book will really beat you over the head with saying patriarchy, purity culture, heteronormativity, internalized misogyny, so why not that?
10 hours, 58 min ago
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Yakult Boy
Yakult Boy is 92% done
I get it, the themes and pathos are coming together so that patriarchy takes Magnolia away from Ellery one last time. But it still feels contrived to rob characters of confronting each other.
11 hours, 35 min ago
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Yakult Boy
Yakult Boy is 91% done
This whole thing feels forced to rob the characters of agency in confronting each other. Undercutting the plot from getting truly messy. Just toss in a disaster that prise away the 2 soulmates from each other. It doesn't feel like a tragedy. It's a cop out.
11 hours, 49 min ago
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Yakult Boy
Yakult Boy is 89% done
Why say you're bringing Hazel to a completely foreign place? She spent her infancy in Indonesia. Yeah she wouldn't remember it but she's still a baby now.
11 hours, 58 min ago
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Yakult Boy
Yakult Boy is 88% done
Once again explaining chindo culture to your chindo granddaughter. About emotional suppression.
12 hours, 10 min ago
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Yakult Boy
Yakult Boy is 87% done
What in the undercutting character-driven conflict sinetron plot twist???????
12 hours, 19 min ago
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