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‘She’d never make a policewoman. Too overweight for one thing. What would
Michelle say about a woman so out of condition…’
— 5 hours, 0 min ago
Michelle say about a woman so out of condition…’
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Laura Field
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‘Ruth climbs in, feeling fat, as she always does in cars. She has a morbid dread of the seatbelt not fitting’
I genuinely don’t know how this is adding in any way to the plot
— 5 hours, 22 min ago
I genuinely don’t know how this is adding in any way to the plot
Laura Field
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Not sure the copious mentions of a woman’s weight are strictly necessary here… feels very overdone.
— 5 hours, 34 min ago
