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Jan 18, 2026 06:52PM
I had trouble feeling invested. Part of this is a me-issue: I don't vibe with rich people problems and the blurb is clear about the characters' status. There could have been more angst or yearning to sell me on the relationship without compromising the overall tone. At 44%, I still don't feel like I know Jamie at all and I don't register Jordan and Jamie as a potential couple. If anything, I kind of like Javi's rivalry with Jordan and see that as having more romantic potential.
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