Teshy’s Reviews > The Map of Love > Status Update

I find this book overly detailed, pages of descriptions that don’t support the overall plot. I can already tell this 500 pg book can easily been cut down by 100 pgs.
It’s also unclear when and who the story is being told by. The jumps of locations, narrator vs character (& which character) is unclear. I loooove books that go back & forth in time but this is not done clearly unfortunately

A bit wordier and more detailed than I’d like so far… waiting to be fully gripped