Brent Nelson’s Reviews > Survivor Song > Status Update

The story is compelling so far, but Natalie is such an annoying character. I'm dreading reading her chapters, but at least they're getting shorter...The one from page 159-161 is a pretty good encapsulation of what I find frustrating about her. She seems to be a ham fisted attempt at crafting a "relatable" character, but she's just a time capsule for all the annoying mannerisms that spread through the Internet at the