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// And holy shit ... how many mistakes can one person make?!!? It has nothing to do with baking, it has to do with being the "detail oriented" individual Arthur claimed to be, and you'd think it'd be true with an MBA!! I mean, you have to be either a complete airhead or going out of your way to make such mistakes. I want to shake Arthur. I don't think the author had to make him out to be such a space cadet ...
— Jan 24, 2017 04:50PM
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Elithanathile
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// "Russ raised an eyebrow and continued. "We are under no circumstances dating. If either one of us gets the opportunity to date someone, we shut this thing down until further notice."
- Say what?!!? Russ, I get that you're scared and trying to protect yourself from getting hurt, but you really should be focusing on protecting yourself from such stupidity!!! WTH?!!?
— Jan 24, 2017 07:51PM
- Say what?!!? Russ, I get that you're scared and trying to protect yourself from getting hurt, but you really should be focusing on protecting yourself from such stupidity!!! WTH?!!?
Elithanathile
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// "Old man"?!!? You're 36!!!! Get over yourself, for Pete's sake, and knock it off with the martyrdom already *grumbles*!!
— Jan 24, 2017 07:41PM
Elithanathile
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// "Russ took his time then, grinding slowly and drinking in the sounds Arthur made as Russ stroked his cock."
- Yayyyyyy *claps hands* COCK has been mentioned :-D!!
— Jan 24, 2017 07:35PM
- Yayyyyyy *claps hands* COCK has been mentioned :-D!!
Elithanathile
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// I'm liking this book so far but how on earth did it get through final editing with so many typos O_O?!?
— Jan 24, 2017 07:34PM
Elithanathile
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// I've noticed that until now, the author has been going through painstaking lengths not to mention the word 'cock'. I LOVE cock, I think cock is HOT, the word AND the body part ;-)!!
— Jan 24, 2017 07:28PM
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// Awwww, Arthur, you are AWESOME and letting someone down gently :-)!! I want to hug you for that and I'm sure Li does too!!
As a side note: I want Li's story now ... and Kieran's too!!
— Jan 24, 2017 05:22PM
As a side note: I want Li's story now ... and Kieran's too!!
Elithanathile
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// Hmmm but maybe I've been a bit hasty in my assessment of Arthur in the schematic of him as a baker's assistant. Maybe the job just didn't mesh with him and that's TOTALLY fine, it happens, I'm just glad his business acumen is skyrocketing Cake My Day :-)!!
— Jan 24, 2017 05:10PM
Elithanathile
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// ... in the bakery to emphasize what a social-media/advertising guru Arthur is!!
— Jan 24, 2017 04:51PM
Elithanathile
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// I'm getting frustrated with all the things that need to be voiced but aren't ... I'm getting frustrated with these two and want to knock their heads together!!
— Jan 24, 2017 04:47PM
