Corey’s Reviews > The Book That Wouldn’t Burn > Status Update

I enjoyed this, but I think it could have been so much more. The story should have exclusively focused on Livira. I get why Evar was included, but his character basically only existed for the twist that happened near the end.

I also didn't like how real-world texts were referenced. This is a fantasy. There doesn't need to be a crow named "Edgarallen."