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J.L. Myers
is 5% done
Bit too confusing and chops from one scene to another without transitions. I'm having to double back to check things already and see if I've missed something that would make things clearer--so far it's not me but the writing style. Not sure I will continue reading at this point.
— Jan 25, 2017 05:10PM
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J.L. Myers
is 5% done
Bit too confusing and chops from one scene to another without transitions. I'm having to double back to check things already and see if I've missed something that would make things clearer--so far it's not me but the writing style. Not sure I will continue reading at this point.
— Jan 25, 2017 05:10PM
