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"His skin was bright with dust and almost seemed to sparkle in the sun." Hmm sounds familiar.... also WHY is it switching from third person to first person? It's driving me crazy.
— Jan 26, 2017 04:34AM
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Stef K
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There's also an overuse of the word 'sojourn' and I feel it's not used in the right context.
— Jan 26, 2017 04:49AM
