Tucker Banks’s Reviews > Making Bombs for Hitler > Status Update

inciting Incident. My character Linda was captured by the Nazis before the story but her life truly changes when her little sister is captured and taken away on a difrent train than hers to a different camp and to be completely alone. Linda is seporated from her only family starting the begining of her suffering untill she finds a way to escape

the archetype on my book is quest because there are multiple cases of the main character attempting an escape or a way to get out of the labor camp. she doesn't totally try to escape all of the time but she does make attempts to sabatoge the bombs bu making the faulty or explode early

My character Linda goes threw many emotional feelings threw the story, for instance she says "all the days blended into a blur" implying that she is in such bad condition she dosent keep track of day and night, but she does bother to sing a lullaby multiple times for all of the kids showing she has feelings and cares deeply enough for side achrecters to attempt to make them feel comforted by a lullaby.

Summary: the summary is they just got of the train and got new bunks they are getting to know eachother the policemen are gathering age date of birth birthplace and whereabouts of there birth the main charecter lies abought her age and gets away with her being allegedly 13

VISUALIZATION: I could picture the main character cramped in a cart with many children with no food or water in horrible conditions in my mind while reading. The text says, "Should they leave us here, in this locked stinky car till we die” (16). This made me feel bad for the characters living in the train car with those horrible conditions.