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I wish this didn't keep flashing back to the 'present day', it feels unnecessary instead of telling the story in order.
— 7 hours, 14 min ago
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I am really struggling with this one, it's pretty boring. In terms of it being a retelling, it feels like it could have been a short story or a novella.
— Jan 20, 2026 08:37PM
