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spwns is on page 104 of 368
Okay I’m finding it irritating that we’re supposed to understand that he’s traumatized and yet none of it is shown except for a few tiny parts here and there. It feels like a cop out to have a therapist be like you have ptsd and yet the author never really delves into that at all. Also, it’s quite… interesting as an Arab to read about this man’s “trauma” from being in Iraq…like ok
Jan 22, 2026 05:42AM
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spwns is on page 273 of 368
The dialogue is so elementary and banal, it got me almost yelling a couple of times
Feb 05, 2026 06:31AM
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spwns is on page 273 of 368
Feb 05, 2026 03:19AM
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spwns is 44% done
It’s hard to believe anything he says about his feelings because he’s kind of just…there. Things are happening to him rather than him being an active participant in anything in his life so I’m kind of finding it difficult to believe that he has any interest in anything…
Jan 30, 2026 08:30AM
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spwns
spwns is on page 65 of 368
Okay I will admit I’m not at all interested in this character but it is quite an easy read, maybe because of how detached and matter of fact he is about everything that it doesn’t really take a lot of mental effort to decipher what is actually happening. Will check back when I’m halfway through.
Jan 19, 2026 12:15PM
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spwns is on page 35 of 368
Jan 17, 2026 01:43AM
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