Crystal Jenkins’s Reviews > A Curse of Storms and Scorn: A Dark Fantasy Romance > Status Update
Crystal Jenkins
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I finally figured out what’s bothering me so much about this book: the character isn’t written to FEEL emotions. She only observes and reacts, like a robot or a sociopath . I don’t think she’s supposed to be one, obviously, but the author does not SHOW her expressing emotions and emotional reactions for the majority of the interactions she’s had the require them.
— Jan 24, 2026 08:17PM
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Crystal Jenkins
is on page 45 of 528
The beginning line of this chapter is literally “my world had always been one thing, and now it was another.” 😑😒 Good lord.
— Jan 22, 2026 08:11PM
Crystal Jenkins
is on page 22 of 528
🙄😮💨 So far this story lacks any kind of depth. Like the fact that everyone got pissed at her, including the commander, over a whistle. 😒 Be for real. I’m going to try and push through but if the interactions don’t have more actual weight, depth and risk soon I’m not going to waste my time.
— Jan 22, 2026 07:45PM
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Jan 24, 2026 09:11PM
Okay, not even 20 pages later and I’m eating my words. She’s finally showing emotion LOL
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