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"Maybe having less chapters taken up with the other Appies and their significant others would have helped establish Camden and Naomi’s relationship more. I don’t know, but it didn’t feel like this book belonged to them. It felt like they were side characters to the rest of the team and to hockey itself and their relationship desperately needed more page time to make it seem genuine." ESTOOOO

"The hockey facts in this one were also just painfully dropped in. I get that Liam was a fan of hockey, but there was so much name dropping and basic hockey explanations that popped up, the way this was continually done just took away from the fact that this was supposed to be a romance book."

"Did they even know each other? She finds out his last name at the hockey game? How was it that 70% in and they had only had 2 conversations the entire book, and one was while she was fuming about her son being hurt?! "

Encima le dice que sa enamorao y ella 😃 creo que hay que hablar con liam

Ah, mira

ALTO DRAMA salir con un joki pleyer estoy hasta arriba, ese es el conflicto en la historia? Todavía sigo pensando en que nisiquiera se sabía su apellido, ahora que lo pienso ha sido demasiada extensión y al mismo tiempo no han habido interacciones, CONVERSACIONES

Siento que el libro tenía que haberse terminado hace 50 páginas atrás

La voz varonil que hace la narradora cuando habla el es HORRIBLE pero jsjsjs está bueno y me gusta mucho El