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iam
is 28% done
eeeeh... you know, you can write a woman who likes sex and feels proud of and empowered by showing off her body without using "pussy", "bitch" and vulgar phrases every second sentence....
— Jan 29, 2017 10:36AM
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iam
is 43% done
kinda considering to DNF this... it's not bad but also not good, and the (male) author is trying wayyyyy too hard with the whole "badass sexy bitch" vibe of his (female) main character :')))
— Jan 30, 2017 08:26AM
