Lyric Birkett’s Reviews > Take the Reins > Status Update

Inciting incident: In my book at the beginning the main character Sasha and her horse charm just arrive at their boarding school, but it doesn't start off well. On her way to the new stables, charm freaks out and runs away. Charm was running so fast he knocked a girl of her horse. On page 12 it says,"Charm was going so fast he couldn't slow down and just rammed into everything he saw." This shows he was destructive.