brittany’s Reviews > We Are Okay > Status Update

“Something in me is cracking open, the light coming through is so bright it hurts, and the rest of me is still here, wounded, even though I know it’s all for the best.”

spoonfeeding hard

“instead of putting my clothes in the dryer, I threw them into the trash.”

why the fuck did you not just do that in the first place

“But the guys and I, we bought it all.”

🥹🥹😭😭😭

“I don’t have her number anymore…. I wish I had it now”

so you can ignore her too? you weren’t gonna be the one to call either

“If you see an old man outside my room, will you knock on the wall to let me know?”

she asks the dirty-motel neighbor that she literally just called broke on the page prior. not only would a random motel goer NOT do that, but how would Gramps even know where you are and what room you’re in, to just be randomly standing out of it….?

“Marin, I don’t…”

that wasn’t my ellipsis because i didn’t need the rest of the quote. it was yet another cut conversation!!!!! this is getting tiring.

“It’s noon, and then it’s one.” “It’s two,” “It’s two thirty.” “It’s three”

not explaining what the girls are doing in between this complaining of passing time, like AGAIN are we just staring at the wall? you can still be non descriptive but be like ‘we went to the dorm, quietly doing our own things. time is getting away but there’s still so much i need to tell her’

“He shook his head and said, “You’ve always been a smart girl.””

SECOND time we finally get to a good part and the scene just ENDS. could have had a deep conversation between Mabel and Gramps about the end of his life and sickness but nooooo. how am i to get emotional if you cut to black mid conversation

“She peels an orange, separates it in perfect halves, and gives one of them to me. If I could wear it like a friendship bracelet, I would.”

… interesting

“We are okay.”

THERE IT ISSSSSS