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Notes:
(1) A lot like before in "If I Ran the Zoo,"
this goes on too long—'round a factor of two.
- Concept's quite decent, but real repetitious:
roll call of bird names all silly/fictitious.
- That's fine if a twist or a turn is thrown in,
but doesn't switch gears and gets watered down thin.
(2) Still, above average creature array.
- I'd read it again, just not right away.
— Jan 27, 2026 08:05PM

Notes:
(1) A lot like before in "If I Ran the Zoo,"
this goes on too long—'round a factor of two.
- Concept's quite decent, but real repetitious:
roll call of bird names all silly/fictitious.
- That's fine if a twist or a turn is thrown in,
but doesn't switch gears and gets watered down thin.
(2) Still, above average creature array.
- I'd read it again, just not right away.
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