Jayson’s Reviews > The Sneetches and Other Stories > Status Update
Jayson
is finished

Notes:
(1) Entirely concept, not stories but hooks.
- All intros and heating, but none of them cook.
(2) The bookended ones have endings, at least,
but ending the tales all-famine-no-feast.
- Jokes minus punchlines, momentum is ceased.
(3) Good morals to tell, but once again, merely,
just hinted, not shown nor hammered out clearly.
- Not satisfying nor played out sincerely.
— Jan 27, 2026 10:10PM

Notes:
(1) Entirely concept, not stories but hooks.
- All intros and heating, but none of them cook.
(2) The bookended ones have endings, at least,
but ending the tales all-famine-no-feast.
- Jokes minus punchlines, momentum is ceased.
(3) Good morals to tell, but once again, merely,
just hinted, not shown nor hammered out clearly.
- Not satisfying nor played out sincerely.
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