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First
is 62% done
Aaaand I'm feeling bored now. It's too repetitive yet says nothing!
"I'm too dangerous, I need them to hate me, even if I don't really want them to, but I have to do it, and I won't even hint as to why or give ANY backstory into myself to allow the READER to connect with me."
THAT is the entire "plot" and "characterization" of this book thus far.
— Jan 28, 2026 02:23PM
"I'm too dangerous, I need them to hate me, even if I don't really want them to, but I have to do it, and I won't even hint as to why or give ANY backstory into myself to allow the READER to connect with me."
THAT is the entire "plot" and "characterization" of this book thus far.
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First
is on page 90 of 286
Damn. I started the first couple of chapters feeling super annoyed with how predictable, irritating, and unoriginal this story and its characters are, but by this point (Chapter 11), I'm somehow now a bit intrigued. Huh. Maybe it's the voice actors?😅🤷🏻♀️
— Jan 25, 2026 10:58PM
