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I can already identify many problems just from the prologue. Why didn't the mother run away before the king take her rights away from her to keep her daughter .

Who owns the baby?
Purple eyes are the special special why?
Why did the king let the mom keep the pub? Why didn't the mom remarry.

I volunteer to serve the empire... Please stop trying to be the Hunger Games

Naudia? Blindfilded now? Yes... Why?
Jan 29, 2026 10:42AM
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Feels pointless having so much on page child abuse.... What commentary is she trying to make? Couldn't she have aged up the characters?

I can't ever imagine young children reading this.
Mar 13, 2026 06:44AM
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