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Em 🩵
is on page 9 of 352
Okay, very early to judge but their writing is very telling not showing. It’s very quick paced with short sentences. It’s very easy to read but idk if I like it like that…we’ll see. I’m not gonna immediately DNF this, that’d be crazy.
— Jan 29, 2026 06:50PM
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Em 🩵
is on page 15 of 352
I’m sorry but like I really do not like the writing style
And call me woke but I also don’t like the way he’s describing the women. He’s objectifying them even when the woman is talking. Maybe I’m not giving it enough chance but I’m just…no
— Jan 29, 2026 07:01PM
And call me woke but I also don’t like the way he’s describing the women. He’s objectifying them even when the woman is talking. Maybe I’m not giving it enough chance but I’m just…no
Em 🩵
is on page 14 of 352
Again, it’s very…TELLING
not showing.
Like he’s explaining the plan and why us worked to her as if she isn’t part of it. Like bro she already knows..be more creative in which you tell us.
— Jan 29, 2026 06:58PM
not showing.
Like he’s explaining the plan and why us worked to her as if she isn’t part of it. Like bro she already knows..be more creative in which you tell us.
Em 🩵
is on page 10 of 352
Obviously it was all a ruse and she was in cahoots with the drunk guy but my god. I feel like you can tell it’s written by a man.. HOWEVER I shall give it a chance.
— Jan 29, 2026 06:53PM
