Lori’s Reviews > The Central Park Mystery > Status Update
Lori
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Ugh. We are starting to get into the overuse of the em dash. It's a shame because the storyline is pretty good.
— Jan 30, 2026 11:51AM
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Lori
is on page 58 of 163
Too many incomplete sentences that come across like incomplete thoughts. Ugh. The annoyance is real.
— Jan 29, 2026 12:16PM
