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Notes: this book could potentially use another round of edits? There are some inconsistencies.
E.g. FMC says she fell twice the height of the golden gate bridge (245ft x 2 = 490ft or 150m).
However, in Chapter 4, it is mentioned that the drop is 50ft (i.e. 15m). A 15m fall would definitely be fatal in many cases, but fatality seems to be around 50%? I know it's different but cliff divers jump from 20-30m
— Jan 30, 2026 07:07PM
E.g. FMC says she fell twice the height of the golden gate bridge (245ft x 2 = 490ft or 150m).
However, in Chapter 4, it is mentioned that the drop is 50ft (i.e. 15m). A 15m fall would definitely be fatal in many cases, but fatality seems to be around 50%? I know it's different but cliff divers jump from 20-30m
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