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Hm the writer’s voice is refreshing…I like the spacious tone, as if the writer is hovering over the scene, seeing everything from a distance…jumps from mind to mind quickly…not too distracting…word choice is a bit overwrought. Kinda reads like the author wrote a sentence, then subbed in hyperspecific words after googling synonyms. Seriously, who says “Balustrade?” It’s a banister, fool. Just say it.
Jan 31, 2026 09:41AM
The Hypocrite

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