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I'm so sorry but the bad writing is making me SO mad I genuinely can't😭
— Jan 31, 2026 08:07PM
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Writing is unbearableeeeeeeeeee (really sorry but I'm triggered😭😭😭)
— Feb 01, 2026 06:16AM
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-No"smth".No"another smth".just"smth else".
-And then...Then...Then!...Not "x" Not "y" but like "z".
-It was "smth"...Too "same smth".
-"and the handsome, handsome face."??(twice)
-The scene where they choose their names was SO bad and forced i'm sorry.
-"Do you ever stop to think about how completely fucked we are?"All the time" bro u just woke up 5 secs ago not knowing who yall r😭😭
— Jan 31, 2026 07:06PM
-And then...Then...Then!...Not "x" Not "y" but like "z".
-It was "smth"...Too "same smth".
-"and the handsome, handsome face."??(twice)
-The scene where they choose their names was SO bad and forced i'm sorry.
-"Do you ever stop to think about how completely fucked we are?"All the time" bro u just woke up 5 secs ago not knowing who yall r😭😭
Ahd
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The way I was so excited to read this and literally 3 pages in and the writing REEEEEEEEEKS of AI to the point that I can't even take it seriously???The constant repetition in words & sentence structures, the extremely dramatic descriptions over nothing, and the painfully forced dialogue. I.CANT.😭😭 either its chatgbt or the writing is just bad i'm SO sorry😭
— Jan 31, 2026 06:48PM
