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sorry superfans, i'm DNFing. the writing style is too distracting. i feel like i'm reading an outline instead of a fleshed out novel
— Jan 31, 2026 10:44PM
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does the writing ever stop reading like a list of things, or....? "shane did this. rozanov said this. shane felt this. their hands touch. shane did this" etc etc. page after page. chapter after chapter
— Jan 31, 2026 10:15PM
