Camille L-M’s Reviews > Unexpected Shift > Status Update

So far, it is entertaining, but for my taste, is it missing some key element:
- it is really fast past. In two weeks, too much happens without introspection.
- the emotional introspection of each character is not as developed as i would like. Her parents died, but she never grieved them. Their deaf is an afterthought.
- the timeline is quick, but it also doesn't make sense at times. Keeping track of time is hard.