C E’s Reviews > Golden Legacy: Part Two > Status Update
C E
is on page 377 of 426
Ok so this part is ok. I feel like this entire fight needed more slow areas. Feels like aerowen could have shown her true form 200 pages ago and the book could have shown how what aerowen is is different instead of the book explaining it. Her backstory being tied to a different persons is ok but im left confused why phoenix doesnt want to be near aerowen when the first book had them around eachother constantly.
— Feb 01, 2026 08:04PM
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C E
is on page 380 of 426
Again i feel like this nee creature could have been introduced earlier and shown us why its different instead of the book feeling like it needs to take a pause to explain why its different.
— Feb 01, 2026 08:07PM
C E
is on page 342 of 426
Honestly wish we had more time with the father as the demon. I feel like him vs melantha could have been a cool fight and the book could have had some epic fight scene seeing what he coukd do as a sylphenic demon. Battle is still dragging to me and there are characters who really fade with this big of a cast fighting. Havent seen much of aerowen or phoenix. Aladora jumps in and out.
— Feb 01, 2026 07:48PM
C E
is on page 332 of 426
The fight is starting to noticeable drag too me. So much is happening yet not much at all. There seems to be moments where people can have a sit and talk yet it makes no sense to me. It feels like a lot of the dialogue and things happening in the fight could have happened before. Also Aladora’s back and we arent goven an explanation yet besides to basically not question magic.
— Feb 01, 2026 07:43PM
C E
is on page 304 of 426
It feels like a lot of vivalda’s mistakes have been lacking consequence in this book. Her recklessness is rewarded and it seems like everytime there is an issue vivalda either has the right magic or answers to solve it. Wish she had more external consequences since it seems like the issues she had in the first book that i loved with her struggles are taken down a notch in this book.
— Feb 01, 2026 07:32PM
C E
is on page 269 of 426
Was updating the wrong version. I have the hardcover and i was updating on the paperback
— Feb 01, 2026 07:19PM
