Art the Turtle of Amazing Girth’s Reviews > Flare Storm - A Ravaged Skies Novel: A Post-Apocalyptic Survival Thriller > Status Update
Art the Turtle of Amazing Girth
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OK
This needs a better editor, and maybe a class on through-storyoutput
It's far too rushed, and just needs more in story downtime
— Feb 02, 2026 04:04AM
This needs a better editor, and maybe a class on through-storyoutput
It's far too rushed, and just needs more in story downtime
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Art the Turtle of Amazing Girth
is on page 147 of 294
I got it figured out
It's all peaks, no valleys
There's about 0.05% downtime as they traverse the flared world.
— Feb 02, 2026 08:39PM
It's all peaks, no valleys
There's about 0.05% downtime as they traverse the flared world.
