Percy’s Reviews > Along the River of Flesh > Status Update

Pls for the love of god, stop calling him "private dick" I don't care that's what he is, just call him a detective and stop being difficult

I keep thinking that bro is leagues better at writing despicable, horrid people than despicable, horrid serial killers bc everytime we are in Keith's pov i want to curbstomp him but when cox is the point of view character all I'm capable of thinking is "okay mister egdelord, how dark and twisted wow"

Whenever we enter Edmund's pov, I'm immediately get pulled out of the story bc I can not take him seriously