Me, My Shelf, & I’s Reviews > Cry, Voidbringer > Status Update
Me, My Shelf, & I
is 71% done
this is decent, but I'm struggling with two things, mainly
1. the pacing. WHY is this book so long? I feel like there are a lot of things that are repetitive or could be truncated and streamlined and it would be better
2. both the narrator and the text make the little girl seem super super naive and super super young (7-8) BUT SHE'S SUPPOSEDLY TWELVE. really grating to hear her voice
— Feb 02, 2026 12:43PM
1. the pacing. WHY is this book so long? I feel like there are a lot of things that are repetitive or could be truncated and streamlined and it would be better
2. both the narrator and the text make the little girl seem super super naive and super super young (7-8) BUT SHE'S SUPPOSEDLY TWELVE. really grating to hear her voice
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