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Notes:
(1) Quite un-Dr. Seuss, all visually loose.
- Its scribbly artwork just doesn't have juice.
(2) Writing for kiddies is no good excuse,
it's still very lazy and narrative-hazy.
- Erratic and random, and never gets crazy.
(3) "I Can Read With My Eyes Shut"? Awful ironic.
- "Read with eyes open" is the whole moral/tonic.
- I hate to be scathing, but the title's moronic.
— 9 hours, 11 min ago
Notes:
(1) Quite un-Dr. Seuss, all visually loose.
- Its scribbly artwork just doesn't have juice.
(2) Writing for kiddies is no good excuse,
it's still very lazy and narrative-hazy.
- Erratic and random, and never gets crazy.
(3) "I Can Read With My Eyes Shut"? Awful ironic.
- "Read with eyes open" is the whole moral/tonic.
- I hate to be scathing, but the title's moronic.
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