Melissa’s Reviews > In the Veins of the Drowning > Status Update

This is terrible

That’s such a badass power tbh

The timeline on this story is nonexistence

Ugh I can’t stop thinking about her throwing up, didn’t mention anything about her brushing her teeth and then he’s kissing her

Why would she still be wearing the engagement ring?? Take it off

Again, it’s been like a WEEK and his already in love with her??????
Ugh no please no

Finally? Dude you’ve known her for like a week tops

The writing is bad what was that hahahaha

Girl just be quiet please is not that hard

It gets so boring at times