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Michael
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Rachel Reid does have a way of getting dirty and still imbueing a sweet playfulness to it.
I definitely find the Kip characterization consistently more effective and charming than I do the Scott characterization.
I’m settling more into this silly cute and a bit empty tone!
Rachel Reid shouldn’t be allowed to use parentheses these are crazy!!!!!!!
— 1 hour, 50 min ago
I definitely find the Kip characterization consistently more effective and charming than I do the Scott characterization.
I’m settling more into this silly cute and a bit empty tone!
Rachel Reid shouldn’t be allowed to use parentheses these are crazy!!!!!!!
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Michael
is on page 70 of 400
The playful style of writing and Kip’s characterization are my high points in my first chunk, along with the wonderful first sex scene.
Biggest negative is Scott’s characterization and the sympathetic part of their relationship toward each other. It’s not effective and for the most part it feels silly derogatory when it comes up.
*screenshots taken on phone*
— 23 hours, 56 min ago
Biggest negative is Scott’s characterization and the sympathetic part of their relationship toward each other. It’s not effective and for the most part it feels silly derogatory when it comes up.
*screenshots taken on phone*
