Amy’s Reviews > Kade > Status Update

This author knows nothing about pregnancy! You don't start getting morning sickness as soon as you have unprotected sex, and pregnancy tests don't show "positive" results after only one week!

Author doesn't know Arizona very well. Story supposedly takes place around Tombstone, which is an area with scrub desert. Kade and Kelsey take Trent's son "fishing" in an area with "pine and juniper trees." So unless they drove at least a couple hours north--either to the mountains near Tucson or even further up to Prescott--there's no way they'd find a lake, pine and juniper trees. No car trip description incl.