M. Langlinais’s Reviews > The Lady on Esplanade > Status Update

I’m only still reading this because I couldn’t find a spoiler. But god, nothing is really happening. It’s SO BORING.

Oooh, so cool, making the nurse male and the doctor female. 🙄 And the doc would’ve had everyone out of the room. I don’t know why I’m even still reading this.

Why does she suggest he make an index card for the doll when he already said he’d made an index card for the doll? Seriously, who “edited” this? They did a crap job with continuity.

Now I’m in an Audi commercial. For real, did they pay for this placement?

Is this supposed to be banter? It’s not cute or funny or even very distinctive.

He was standing by the driver’s side door then suddenly opening the passenger side door for her? And walking back around the truck? Editor??

It’s pretty clear I’m missing some context from previous books but I will plow ahead regardless. Meanwhile, ma’am, there should be concept art for what the house will look like?