Cal’s Reviews > The Children of Gods and Fighting Men > Status Update
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There's hope here yet. Still not a fan of the prose/dialogue, but I can see potential in where things are headed with the story
— 20 hours, 22 min ago
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Cal
is on page 79 of 416
Not gonna lie, pretty rough out the gates. We've already had a handful of my least favorite forms of info dumping: having two characters say something they both already know out loud for no reason other than letting the reader know about it...
— Feb 05, 2026 09:45PM
