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I mean the more I think about it the more that this should be in the perspective of Omelogor, like completely. Maybe a smaller perspective from Kadiatou or Chiamaka but honestly I don't think that's needed

If this was more about Kadiatou and Omelogor and the other two women. Chiamaka and Zikora, were in the background or have less of a narrative it might have made more sense 🤔 I feel like there's too many characters for what I believe the themes are. Two POVs is the max I personally can handle for this type of story