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Overall im enjoying it so far, but theres a couple of elements of the writing that bother me theres some odd descriptive details in the dialogue.
“Charlie shook his head, like common misconception..”
I just personally feel like it doesn’t need the extra “like *insert description here*” in the dialogue sections. I’ve noticed it a couple times has anyone else picked up on it?
Is it just me being picky?😂
— 19 hours, 21 min ago
“Charlie shook his head, like common misconception..”
I just personally feel like it doesn’t need the extra “like *insert description here*” in the dialogue sections. I’ve noticed it a couple times has anyone else picked up on it?
Is it just me being picky?😂

