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First impression: Great start with a premise I haven’t heard before.
Second impression: It’s being ruined slightly by the terrible dialogue and internal monologue of the MC.
— 5 hours, 33 min ago
Second impression: It’s being ruined slightly by the terrible dialogue and internal monologue of the MC.
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