L Sider’s Reviews > The Amalfi Curse > Status Update

Sleepy sleepy writing lacks character time to sleep sleep sleep time

I’m finding myself bored by Mari’s chapters; I don’t love the change back and forth from first person to third person, and I just find Haven’s story a lot more compelling overall (gimme that good treasure hunting plot!). I’m hoping that this is just a first half of the book thing, but I’m also not getting my hopes up.

So far so good! I think it's safe to say that I am compelled ✨