Jessica Weavil’s Reviews > A Dawn of Onyx > Status Update

I’m struggling with the main character’s sudden shift from infatuation to hatred toward the MMC, especially since he’s shown himself to be fair and merciful. While the writing is often beautifully descriptive, it can drag the pacing, and repeated references to past trauma make the plot feel more like dramatic moments strung together than fully developed character growth—though it still has potential.