Brooklynn fleming’s Reviews > Modern Divination > Status Update

It was good and all the tropes portrayed in this book are ones I love I just don’t think the execution was as good as the potential and with good editing and a little bit of reworking. I think it could be phenomenal and I know there’s a traditionally published one so maybe I’ll give it a try someday

I’m curious to see how the traditionally published one is different from the self published. I’m really enjoying this, but I think I’d enjoy it more with more editing. Some parts are just too clunky and some plot points are not discussed enough and there’s a lot of tell not show

I am halfway through and I’m thoroughly enjoying this, but I do think there are a couple plot points that aren’t being discussed enough which makes it slightly confusing

Ahh this is so good Theodore the man you are

It’s good so far I’m curious to see where it goes there is some repetition of sentences but it could be because I’m reading the indie edition

I will always eat up university, secret societies and a little magic

So far, this is all the tropes I love