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I feel that Chloe has improved a lot in terms of describing the scene/characters compared to her previous books. But, this book has too many unnecessary description to the point that I skip so many paragraphs yet can still understand the plot. Also almost 400 pages in and I’m still not in the action-packed scene of the book. It drags too much; some scenes can be cut and I would still have the same understanding.
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Kezia
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it’s always a hit or miss for me when it comes to Chloe Gong. Hit - Foul Lady Fortune (this was fast-paced and kept me on my toes). Miss - These Violent Delights (a lot of jarring, obvious plot holes) but then again this was her debut.
With this one, so far, I’m not hooked yet with the story. I dislike multiple POVs though I know it will pay off (hopefully). Let’s see what happens in the 200-page mark.
— Feb 14, 2026 07:12AM
With this one, so far, I’m not hooked yet with the story. I dislike multiple POVs though I know it will pay off (hopefully). Let’s see what happens in the 200-page mark.
