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Dov
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Good plot weird writing style still, not a fan of the pov change plus time skip in that pov
, still confusing prose/grammar but could just be me.
— 18 hours, 2 min ago
, still confusing prose/grammar but could just be me.
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Dov
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Love the powers, character building and world expansion. The grammar at times is confusing to me, not a knock on the writer more on myself and I think there are terminologies that are not yet explained as normally the world and words are revealed though the characters own povs not the narration. This is fine but does confuse me at times. Still a great book!! Highly recommend the series so far!!!!
— Feb 12, 2026 03:57PM

