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If Henry VIII never broke with Rome, he wouldn’t have married more than once. And if he didn’t, the Tudor dynasty would’ve continued with Catherine of Aragon’s would-be offspring. No Elizabeth I, no Stuart’s, so how on earth could there be an Elizabeth II or Charles or Diana. I understand this is a parallel universe with some similarities but the historical execution is pretty severely lacking.
Feb 17, 2026 11:56PM
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While I do appreciate the progression of Harker and Eve’s relationship, could this almost-kiss have occurred when Daz was not operating on Martindale’s fatal injuries? Harker only seems to remember what is occurring when he wakes up and Banks interrupts their intimate moment.
Feb 24, 2026 10:54AM
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Such a shame about all this inconsistent, dystopian world-building. So, the Americas were never colonised by the Europeans and the continent retained its lanaguage, and yet Manhattan is still full of skyscrapers and crowded living? The British Empire doesn’t exist but the monarchy is still existing and did not fall? The Beatles don’t exist but Beethoven and Bach and other composers all wrote their symphonies?
Feb 22, 2026 03:00PM
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So Les Mis doesn’t exist, on account of the French Empire being the powerhouse of the world, as opposed to the British, but Dracula somehow does exist? With the same plot points occurring in the story?
Feb 20, 2026 11:58PM
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How far back do the historical differences go? Would Eve and Harker even be capable of understanding each other? Did the Normans invade and inject a French influence into the English language? The Diana part also makes little sense. Not only in a descendants sort of way.
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