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is finished

Notes:
(1) It feels dialed down, hardly weird nor exciting,
no eye-catching art nor exceptional writing.
- Really, making up words just to end on a rhyme
is awfully lazy, if no lyrical crime.
(2) With no proper story nor dazzling art,
it gets pretty dull, even lifeless in parts.
(3) As a childlike daydream, it's fueled by bizarre,
but weirdness is muted—low gas in this car.
— Feb 18, 2026 06:30AM

Notes:
(1) It feels dialed down, hardly weird nor exciting,
no eye-catching art nor exceptional writing.
- Really, making up words just to end on a rhyme
is awfully lazy, if no lyrical crime.
(2) With no proper story nor dazzling art,
it gets pretty dull, even lifeless in parts.
(3) As a childlike daydream, it's fueled by bizarre,
but weirdness is muted—low gas in this car.
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